IFReviewed by Andrew Plotkin on 2006-07-01 04:55
Okay, I've seen games where you have a limited time before you starve. I've seen games where you have a limited time before a monster eats you. I've even seen games where you have a limited time before your bladder bursts.
I must admit I've never seen a game where you have a limited time before you fling yourself off a balcony.
The author can't write English, none of the puzzles are solvable, you're always under an absurd time limit, and the bugs actually outnumber the correct lines of code. And yet, the story hiding in here isn't too bad. It could be turned into an interesting SF thriller game. With, don't take this wrong, another few years of IF authorship experience.
Bonus quarter-point for using the word "electroluminescent". (I just went to a Halloween party, wearing an electroluminescent armband. Really.)