IFReviewed by Andrew Plotkin on 2006-06-25 09:53
(For no particular reason, I'm writing these comments as I play, instead of when I'm done.)
First-person, sigh -- although I guess the author is trying to write in a style that sticks out; not just first-person, but all lower-case.
(I don't know what the heck's going on here.)
Okay, the author is definitely playing with prose styles here.
However, now it's over and I still don't know what the heck's going on. We've definitely got enthusiasm, and the car chase is a great set-piece, but I'd like it to be in aid of something.