IFReviewed by Jacqueline A. Lott
on 2006-07-21 07:37
One big fucking long intro sentence lacking a necessary comma, and then they forget how to string together more than five words to form a phrase. Also, things present aren't... well... present. You can't look at the post office or the bar or any of it. Okay, trying to leave back the way I came was mildly amusing. I've wandered a bit, but none of the scenery is actually, you know, here.
Try implementing a couple of objects next time.