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7 Stars IFReview Rating Temple of Kaos

IFReviewed by Paul OBrian on 2006-07-21 06:23 

Game Profile

Author
Peter Gambles

Idiom
English

Authoring System
Tads2

Release Year
2003

IFR Overall Rating
4 Stars IFR Overall Rating
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Much to my dismay, Temple Of Kaos has nothing to do with Maxwell Smart or Agent 99. I mean, sure, getting permission from whoever owns the rights to the show would probably be an insurmountable hurdle, but legal problems aside, wouldn't Get Smart make a fantastic IF milieu? The Shoe Phone, the Cone Of Silence... I can just picture it. This Temple of KAOS, however, isn't the stronghold of a nefarious organization of evil spies whose efforts must be thwarted by the agents of CONTROL, but rather a bizarre otherworld, where rules of time, space, and spelling (it's called KAOS for no discernible reason) don't apply. Basically, the two salient features of this game are its disregard for making sense, and its propensity to express itself in verse, sometimes free, sometimes blank, and usually with end rhymes. As such, it's a highly experimental game, and while I think both of the experiments fail in this instance, they illuminate some remarkable territory along the way.

Let's tackle the nonsensical part first. In the ABOUT text, the author states that part of his intention with the game is to "interfere, out of sheer mischief, with some of the normal perceptions / causal relationships of IF space-time." Mission accomplished, and in some parts of the game, the technique works well. The first section in particular contains a puzzle which utterly confounds standard expectations of how the world ought to work, but it's possible to figure out the alternate system of reality at work in the puzzle, and thereby defeat it. The process of doing so is really fun, reminiscent of the flavor of The Gostak or For A Change. More specifically, the reason the puzzle works is that even though the PC's actions don't produce the expected results, they do produce some results, and from these results it's possible to deduce what's really going on. The same can't be said of most of the other puzzles in the game. Even for IF set in a much more mundane universe, feedback design is one of the toughest parts of puzzle creation -- you don't want to be so obvious that the puzzle becomes a non-puzzle, but your feedback also mustn't be so obscure (or nonexistent) as to leave the player shaking her head in confusion even when the solution is revealed. Most of the puzzles in TOK err on the latter side of this line. I think that for every puzzle after the first one, I looked at the hints, and for most of them even the hints were insufficient. (Thankfully, the author provided a walkthrough.) For some puzzles, the solution made a tortured kind of sense once I'd looked it up, but for many, I found myself just following the walkthrough's instructions with a shrug. Sufficient feedback is very important in any IF puzzle, but in a world where the normal rules don't apply, feedback becomes utterly crucial -- how are we supposed to figure out the rules without the ability to gather any evidence about them? TOK usually (though not always) fails to provide enough feedback to make its puzzles solvable, which takes a lot of the fun out of playing.

What does provide some fun is the game's tendency to present its room and object descriptions in a shaky kind of poetry. For instance, the first room description:


In the North Chamber

Chamber of the north, so empty, still, all noise grates
Black as night the chest your thought awaits.
The other chamber southward lies
Cloaked in mystery's disguise.

Most, but not all, of the game's verse rhymes like this -- sometimes the lines lack rhyme or even consistent meter. Moreover, there's a fair bit of prose mixed in, as conversation, library responses, or descriptions of action, and the presence of these rather ordinary bits of writing juxtaposed with the more elevated verses tends to drain the effectiveness of each. The other problem with the poetry is reminiscent of what happened in Graham Nelson's final game, The Tempest. That is, it's tough enough to craft IF prose that communicates clearly and concisely, and that also provides enough information to the player, but to do so in verse is much, much harder. TOK's poetry isn't at as great a disadvantage as The Tempest, which forced itself to use prewritten lines as room and object descriptions, but it can still be rather opaque. Usually the lines aren't pure gibberish, and they sometimes even manage to pack a few clues in, but nevertheless it does take some time to translate, for instance, "Black as night the chest your thought awaits" into "There's a black chest here." The poetry technique is ill-chosen in combination with the game's nonsensical laws of time, space, and causality, since either one by itself is confusing enough but together they can be utterly impenetrable. However, TOK does give some glimpses of how compelling an IF game in pure verse could be, and of how fascinating it might be to play in a universe with a completely different set of basic rules. Play it for these glimpses, but don't be afraid to reach for the walkthrough.

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